[DNA] WG LC comments on draft-ietf-dna-goals-01.txt

[Pekka Nikander <pekka.nikander@nomadiclab.com>]

> This is a reminder that the WG LC on
> draft-ietf-dna-goals-01.txt is running and ends on next
> Monday, Sep 27th.  Please do read the draft, and send your
> comments to the ML, even if it is "I read it and I think it is good".
>
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dna-goals-01.txt

Overall, I think that the draft is pretty good.  I am sending some
minor edits directly to the authors.

What is more considerable, in my opinion, are the following:

   1. I think we should make clear in the Introduction that
      we are here only dealing with IPv6.  That is clear from
      the context, i.e. our charter, but it should also be
      clearly stated _early_ in the document.  (Or did I just
      miss it?)

   2. I suggest that we add the following paragraph to the
      beginning of Section 3, just after the section title.

    The DNA working group has been chartered to define an improved
    scheme for detecting IPv6 network attachment.  In this section,
    we define the goals that any such solutions should aim to fulfil.

   3. With regard to goal G10, which currently states that ...

>      DNA schemes should take into consideration the case where a host
>      is attached to more than one link at the same time.

     ... should we add "or multiple times to the same link"?

--Pekka Nikander